Ash P Reads

The plot for this book was great but it could have been better. The suspense and action was as good as anything out there. My issue was that I felt too much of the story was left untold. There was a lack of character and plot background. New characters were introduced without any build up or connection to the story line. The book even started out as if it was a sequel to a previous book. As a reader, I felt that I had to assume most of what was going on.

This book has so much potential. I think with a little guidance from a good editor, a little more character and background plot development and a lot of feedback from beta-readers this book could be among the best sellers in the PNR genre.

Free copy provided in exchange for an honest review.