
First Love

Book 1 is an entertaining and light read. Considering the book is about Samantha's sex life I get that the author gets pretty much straight to the point. But here is where I will get up on to my soapbox for a bit. The book is labelled for Young Adults and Teens. It's on the header of every page. But the question raised in my mind was, Would I like my teenager to read this? Jump into bed with the first guy who shows an interest, that too for her first time and without any birth control or protection? That's just straight up irresponsible writing. So my suggestion would be to reconsider a rewrite, look at the bigger picture and take stock of the kind of impression you want to leave on your readers.