High Witch Box Set

High Witch Box Set - Mona Hanna I received this book in exchange for an honest review

The High Witch books could have made a great series, if the author could make up her mind about whether she wanted them to be a series for adults or middle schoolers. The story and most of the dialogue was simple seemingly targeted for young readers but then you have these intimate scenes which just seem so out of place. The potential in the storyline is definitely there but the execution and grammar/ language / sentence construction is immature. It read the over emotional over dramatic dialogue of movies from the 30s.

Initially when I began reading book 1 I thought maybe I could get my 13 year old to read it then the sex scene came in and I thought maybe not. Maybe with a rewrite and defined genre it could work but in its present state it is not impressive.